Zombie Infected Lab Post!

My Narrative!

This term we are learning how to write a narrative and learn what it needs also we are writing it to give somebody else something to read and look forward to reading it, we are learning to write a good introduction!

One Ebony black Midnight laid a dark cloaked killer with a face of a dead zombie you’d see in your Nightmare’s! The killer wearing inky red boots with razor sharp spikes on the bottom, the bloody cloak had blood dribbling down the sides like red juice going down a waterfall. The lab silent, suddenly a window shatters  and then another going over and over again, the killer suddenly through a knife down the hall landing bang straight on the wall. The killer mysteriously disappeared into dust, then with flash the killer turned back to normal, the croaky door closing.

Orientation: (first paragraph) * Where did the story take place? * When did the story take place? * How did the story begin? * Who?
Complication or problem: a description/ explanation of the problem. The problem usually involves the main character(s).
Resolution: how the problem has been solved.
Conclusion: a final concluding statement.
Characterisation: a description of the main characters. What do they look like?
Theme: a clear message.

I need to develop reading over my work and make sure it makes sense!